Re:The Story Game :D

Discussion in 'Forum Games' started by S J K, Jul 11, 2017.

  1. Ilela

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    leave
     
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    going
     
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    "if you don't leave its going"?
     
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    ...to eat you.
     
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    There was no apostrophe in the "its". The word is a possessive pronoun (object belonging to it), not a contraction (meaning it is). No idea what the rules are about adding/removing punctuation to earlier parts of the story.

    Anyway, to try to course-correct...

    Once there was a dozen guerillas going around a child with a ferocious beast which can fly if you don't leave its Going

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